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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-10-27 08:01 PM



Warrior

In the reflection I see
The tears of a warrior
Dripping into the pools
That reflect them

She’s vaguely familiar
This crying warrior
But hers is a fierce beauty
A beauty based on horror

She’s unlike any I’ve ever seen
Distant, hard, unyielding
Her eyes black in the shadows
Are piercing and set to kill

There is no reason for this thing
For writing of this warrior
I’ve never met her before
And she’s terrifyingly beautiful

And I choose to write of her
Of me this cold ice thing
I’ve never been so beautiful
And I’ve never been so hard



"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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1 posted 2007-10-27 09:56 PM


Well in my opinion I liked the first one better but the second one was good too.. nice Kate
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2 posted 2007-10-28 02:32 AM


I like both but first is great..
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