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Alaina
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since 2007-06-16
Posts 106


0 posted 2007-10-27 05:11 PM


I see your fingers lace with hers,
Why can’t they be with mine?
I told you when we were first friends,
“Please don’t let me down”

“No one can care for you,
How I care for you
I’ll never break you down,
I’ll always lift you up”

I believed you when you told me that,
So why haven’t you locked up my trust?
You’re the only one who’s ever had it,
And you still took me for granted

Why can’t you see me the way I see you?
Why can’t I be the owner of your thought, like you are of mine?
You light up all my dark days,
When will the day come, when I do the same for you?

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-10-27 06:51 PM


i feel the same way so many times.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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