Unhappy Birthday ( kinda dark)

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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2007-10-27 12:44 PM

yep so this is a shower thought! hahaha yeahhhh! lol k so its not that good but w/e it was on my mind....by the way some lines are really forced and horrible so yea here it is :

It’s that time of year again
When I turn another year old
It’s supposed to be your favorite holiday
But that’s just what I’m told

The best part is the presents
Or maybe it’s the cake
Some say it’s the company
And all the memories you make

But my birthday’s not like that
I don’t know all those joys
I never feel any different
Nor do I get cake, company, or toys

Daddy will be dull again
Mom will scream and shout
She’ll probably hit me too
Just because I’m about

If I do get to have some friends over
They’ll just come for something to do
They’ll all just be rude and mean to me
But then again, that’s nothing new

No need to take any pictures
You won’t see a smile on my face
Why would a mother want to remember
The only person she truly hates?

The teachers will all say “Happy belated birthday!
But what are all those bruises from?”
I’ll just reply “it’s from all I did this weekend
Obviously I had a lot of fun”

Another lie that I just told
Reality I just bent
All because I’m another year old
Unhappy Birthday Again

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2007-10-27 01:06 AM

Damn... thats sad.

You kept me to the end.

I could see aspects of my childhood in there.

Good read.

Thank you.

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2007-10-27 01:44 AM

dang what the hell this is sad
well my bdays suck too i dont do much
but great poem

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-10-27 02:38 AM

wow this was so sad but so beautifully written it made me want to cry.. I hope things get better for u

Krysti

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

4 posted 2007-10-27 12:32 PM

seeker72 and justanotherstorm: im glad u guys liked it and im so sorry if i reminded you of something that isnt so wonderful to remember. i hope things get better for you guys

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2007-10-27 12:34 PM

hey Krysti!!! thanx i have no idea where is came from....just all of a sudden it was there

to tell the truth my birthday is not actuallly that bad...parts are but not all. but thanx fot the encouragement

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