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Teen Poetry #8

sorry 4 this end

deathbilove
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since 2007-10-26

Posts 6

0 posted 2007-10-26 08:59 PM

i see my life come to an end
then i see my only friend
my memories start to fade away
but the sight of her starts to parade... my mind
thoughts of her always being so kind
she cried with me through the night
held me close when i was in fright
she never left me during our fights
though i made a mistake
stabbing her with a stake thru her heart she cried
i'll never forget that night
her silent screams reached my ear
i'm sorry i want to tell her
but all i do is hug her for the last time

i'm sorry

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

1 posted 2007-10-26 09:10 PM

what was that about 'cuz that was deep. Well at least to me it sounded like a friendship the went down the drain.

deathbilove
New Member

since 2007-10-26

Posts 6

2 posted 2007-10-26 09:14 PM

its about a friendship thats in a storm but one of them is dying cuz theyre trying to get out of it while the other one is there but i dont know their feelings
i just hope this friendship last forever cuz i miss it

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