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deathbilove New Member
since 2007-10-26
Posts 6 |
cursed isnt the title y is life so messed up being a teen is so f*ckd up mothers yellin at u fathers just watchin watchin u get beaten watchin u get torn while u think to yourself i wish i was never born he knows how i feel i can see it in his eyes yet he just watches me watches me slowly die i thought u loved me dad but know i know that aint true all that time u said you were workin late i knew u lied but its cool dad at least u tried now i realize that i should die im here for people to yell at me cuz of their own stupidity i cant take this sh*t no more realize it think about it know about it now look at me...im dead im sorry mom wait no i aint i hate u |
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deathbilove New Member
since 2007-10-26
Posts 6 |
wow youre really depressing my friend really depressing tho i know y u hate her btw nice poem |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
wow really good. i soooo know how u feel. but when posting u should try to use proper english just a suggestion tho. |
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nevermore93 Member
since 2007-10-24
Posts 73 |
hey check out my poem, "resurrected" and "i need to be free" in this forum. your poem is good, so i would like to hear wwaht yout hink. you to rebel |
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