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justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
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0 posted 2007-10-26 12:33 PM



When I leave this world everything will become so much better
But I will feel sorrow for leaving them all behind
But the truth is that this world will never change
Please save me
Save me from myself
There's nowhere left to hide
Thoughts of suicide
Please save me
Save me from myself
What do you call pain
Cuz I don't feel it anymore
I'm too numb now
Slitting my wrist
But I can't feel the danger
Of losing myself
I'm falling behind
But you're so close to me
They call me emotional but they don't understand what it means
I was suicidal
Falling on my knees
Please O God forgive me
But I want to leave this world behind
They don't understand what I'm going through
They don't know that I am bi.
Keeping this from them all my life
I can feel the pain now
I can feel my life passing by
Please save me
Save me from myself...

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2007-10-26 06:00 PM


Wow very powerful and I tried to write something like that but it got rejected, but have to say that youre poem reminded me of myself so much.
rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
2 posted 2007-10-26 11:18 PM


wow this is really good. i relaly like the line that says: they call me emotional but they dont understand what that means
i was suicidal

relaly good.

rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2007-10-26 11:31 PM


wow all our conversations are all over the place....really confusing...just try  to email me and we can talk poems or w/e
justanotherstorm
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since 2007-10-24
Posts 321

4 posted 2007-10-27 01:36 AM


yeah umm thanx
rebelangelv
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usa
5 posted 2007-10-27 07:09 PM


ur welcome
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