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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2007-10-26 12:31 PM



I wanted you our of my life

And hoped that you would change

That has happened now

Except you’re still the same



It happened on a Thursday

You left without saying goodbye

That isn’t how I imagined it

I can’t believe this is my life



I used to love you a lot

And defend you immensely

But you never loved me as much

I don’t understand what was so wrong with me



I guess you just stopped caring

About everything you had

It’s left me feeling numb and shocked

And just a little bit sad



I never stopped to realize

How happy I would b

The day you said goodbye

And totally abandoned me



Now that you’re back

I wish you were gone

So that this place that I live in

Can finally be called home

© Copyright 2007 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
justanotherstorm
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1 posted 2007-10-26 12:34 PM


wow that sucks
do u like h8 your mom or somethin

rebelangelv
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2 posted 2007-10-26 12:36 PM


yea kinda...does that sound horrible? i guess i have my reasons....sorry if it sounded hateful
justanotherstorm
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3 posted 2007-10-26 12:38 PM


nah i guess some moms are real dogs you know so why u h8 your mom if u dont mind me askin
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4 posted 2007-10-26 12:41 PM


Awe Leah this is a good poem. It's really gonna be great having you around and, I moms.. ahhh they always have good and bad sides.. I hope you feel better soon
rebelangelv
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5 posted 2007-10-26 12:42 PM


cuz shes a butt. she is an alcoholic barely in recovery...ever since i was a baby she always cussed me out and treated me like dirt. she has major anger problems and just loves to scream and for 2 months straight all she did was abuse me in her drunken state. then she left cuz she lost her job for drinking and my dad almost divorced her for trying to give me drugs yet shes still in my life....wow i just let a lot out..
justanotherstorm
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6 posted 2007-10-26 12:42 PM


Leah..hmmm thats your name
rebelangelv
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7 posted 2007-10-26 12:44 PM


yea my names Leah
justanotherstorm
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8 posted 2007-10-26 12:45 PM


wow i didnt expect that whole reply
but yea im sorry for you i wish mothers could be a lil nicer u know they have rage inside of them against their own children it seems like dont it

justanotherstorm
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9 posted 2007-10-26 12:46 PM


thats a pretty name
rebelangelv
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10 posted 2007-10-26 12:46 PM


actually i wasnt expecting that either...lol just came out...but eh u know u just deal with it and move on cuz theres nothing a kid can do u know
rebelangelv
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11 posted 2007-10-26 12:47 PM


thanx!
justanotherstorm
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12 posted 2007-10-26 12:50 PM


your welcome

i hate bein a kid i wish i was like 16 so i can like get my car and leave

forget this world forget this life
i cant deal with all this strife
so much commotion and many more mixed emotions
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[This message has been edited by Ringo (10-26-2007 11:26 AM).]

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13 posted 2007-10-26 08:15 AM


hey this is deep..
i'd check ur spelling and stuff..
if u care..and uhm yea..
sorry about ur mom..i have a friend whose
in almost the exact situation..but she
doesn't have a dad to help her through
it..he already left her..
just work ur way through it. u sound like a tough girl. u've gone through alot already it sounds like..so chya..
how old are u two?
props
¢¾jess

rebelangelv
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14 posted 2007-10-26 09:15 PM


to justanotherstorm:
wow that was pretty good! yea im sooooo with u on the car thing....i mean once i get one ill b able to leave for like all day. it may not b a move out but it will definatley help....hmmmm so i guess ur younger than 16 huh.... interesting

rebelangelv
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15 posted 2007-10-26 09:16 PM


latteaddict213:
yea i know my spelling sux on here i noticed that after ive posted it....that really stinks about ur friend. i hope that shes okay. i would die w/o my dad. but n e ways thanx again

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16 posted 2007-10-26 09:29 PM


tight poem
justanotherstorm
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17 posted 2007-10-26 09:33 PM


yeah im young hbu
rebelangelv
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18 posted 2007-10-26 09:38 PM


justanotherstorm:yep young too
deathbilove: hannah????

justanotherstorm
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19 posted 2007-10-27 01:40 AM


thats cool
whose hannah

rebelangelv
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20 posted 2007-10-27 12:42 PM


idk who hannah is...i thought it was someone else but i guess i was wrong..i think i scared the poor kid away. n e ways. our conversations are all over the plass and im not gunna post my age on here so yea just contact me out side of pip talk  
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