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justanotherstorm
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0 posted 2007-10-25 11:55 PM



this aint no poem
and is kind of pointless if u dont know me

I see the world in God's eyes
But I'm not God
Not even close
Just another human being living in this world
I ask questions I give answers they might not be right
They might not be what you want to hear
But don't hate me  
It's just my opinion
I observe people not in the dirty minds like most people
But I observe what they do and how they do things
It makes me realize how stupid people are
Or even how somewhat intelligent people can be
If you're like me I have nothing to say
Cuz my words to you won't matter anyways
This is a start of a new beginning that's about to end
So try not to become my friend


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1 posted 2007-10-26 01:22 AM


If you're like me I have nothing to say
Cuz my words to you won't matter anyways~

Not a poem oh too bad because it would be such a nice one I really liked this. Hope to read more from you.Welcome To Passions!!!
Krysti

justanotherstorm
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2 posted 2007-10-26 09:35 AM


thank you

i said this aint a poem only cuz its not like the other ones i have written
my other ones rhyme and will someday get to the point
my poems that dont rhyme usually just get straight to the point

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