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nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

0 posted 2007-10-25 08:50 PM

There is a shadow that preys on each of us.
It brings to us a fear beyond imagination.
Its dark radiance haunts and chills our spines
and our own fears come to full reallization.

This shadow that follows our every move,
knows too well the secrets we hold dear.
It abuses our thougths for its own ambitions,
of causing us terror by means of deadly premonitions.

With its unending power over the human mind,
the shadow manipulates our every emotion.
Sanity becomes something that transcends time.
And in the end you find yourself alone
watching the rest of your life pass by.

[This message has been edited by nevermore93 (10-26-2007 05:13 PM).]

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-10-25 08:53 PM

wow, this was heavily dark . . . i felt frightened.
your talented thouhg . . . throughly talented.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

nevermore93
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 73

2 posted 2007-10-25 08:57 PM

im gald you liked it kate. if only i could get more people to read my poetry. 'sigh"

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2007-10-25 08:58 PM

i know the feeling

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2007-10-26 12:19 PM

Dark indeed... And very true. Your poems have a lot of insight.

The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates

Only at TroyT...

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-10-26 01:27 AM

ahh yes, Passions sometimes does that. sometimes people post tonnes then sometime no one replies it's not that your poem is bad or no... I guess it's just the roll of the dice. Nice poem I liked it a lot... great to have you here in Teen too:0
Krysti

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

6 posted 2007-10-26 07:54 AM

This was dark and very fullfililng to the senses..i liked it..props..
¢¾jess

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

7 posted 2007-10-26 01:22 PM

"
With its unending power over the human mind,
the shadow manipulates our every emotion.
Sanity becomes something that transcends time.
And in the end you find yourself alone
watching the rest of your life pass by."

My favorite stanza^^

This was a wonderful read for me, it shows the darkness in the world to the exact dot.

~Stargal

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
@-->---

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

8 posted 2007-10-26 04:36 PM

loved it I am a fan of dark poetry thats were this shoulda been. you are going in my library.

Plz check out my poem Flame. It's in Dark Poetry#4

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

9 posted 2007-10-27 12:19 PM

I read this earlier this evening and was dragged away.

This was a very good poem, it flowed well and kept me reading.

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