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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2007-10-25 08:42 PM


The sound of your voice makes me feel just a little bit better
But can I go back to being depressed?

Thank you.

Excuse me please
As I make my way
Through crowds of confusion
Lost hope and delusions

Am I losing my friend?
Or is it an over reaction?
I don't ask
Because I'm not sure
That I'd like the answer

Help me, please,
Help you see
What you're doing to us
Please, Hun, please,
Don't drift,
Don't leave.

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (10-26-2007 10:03 AM).]

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-10-25 08:50 PM


Oh Rerra, how many times I've felt that. . . .

-Kate

ps this is in my library

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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