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Teen Poetry #8

Could've, Should've, Would've

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-10-24 08:32 PM

I wish I could love you like you love me
I wish you could be the one to make me happy
But the truth is ever since I lost him
it seems i can't love anyone again

When I'm kissing you I wish It was his kiss
when you're holding me it's only him I miss
It's him that I want, him that I need
and you that makes my heart bleed

becuase of the lies I'm handing to you
and they take you to like sticky glue
the more I lie the more you believe
But I can't say the truth that I want you to leave

Why wont my heart just let me move on
and realize that i'm with you and he is gone
Maybe I still love him and I can't let him go
maybe we were meant to be i guess i'll never know
But just those thoughts of what I
could've should've, would've done

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2007-10-24 09:15 PM

He must have been something special to write so well a poem over. Or maybe this is only a fraction of your potential.

I eagerly wait,
for the developing words,
of a mending heart.

The more you know, the more you know you don't know. -Socrates

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-10-24 09:17 PM

my dear friend
why art thou so troubled
knowest thou not that all things mend with time?

peace be with you dear Krysti

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

3 posted 2007-10-24 09:21 PM

ahh this was amazing. i loved it, you wrote such a clear, relate able story. great job

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-10-27 04:43 PM

Assassin_of_Verse- Thank you for your kind words, I guess he really was a special person to me.. still can't get over him.

Kate- Great to hear from you and thank you.. I guess I will wait for that peace thing

Alaina- Thank you for your reply. It meant a lot to me to have you read my poem.
~Krysti

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