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Teen Poetry #8

fall into a void

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-10-22 08:05 PM

fall into a void
pretend i dont exsist
all these senseless things
make me forget
so lets take this plane
and fly far far away
i dont think ill make it
but bury me the same

wont you be my knife baby
and cut away the pain
rip away the darkness
that falls down with the rain

wont you be my rope
and secure me from my fall
or will you become my noose
and not save me at all

oh and dont you know
this can break
its fragile porcelin
that just needs a good shake
then watch as the pieces
fall from the sky
embedding deep into a canvas of lies

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

1 posted 2007-10-22 08:17 PM

again, amazing...my favorite part:
"then watch as the pieces
fall from the sky
embedding deep into a canvas of lies"

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2007-10-23 06:59 AM

This is great.. Always have loved ur work.. how do u feel about driving that plane of urs all the way to Australia..

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-10-24 01:03 AM

oh wow I loved this CO amazingly written:0
Krysti

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