It’s something like Pain

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Teen Poetry #8

It’s something like Pain

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2007-10-21 08:27 PM

ha ha ha, here's a funny you all might enjoy. i was going to name this pain, (you see i'm a fan of easy or interesting titles) but then i thouhgt, eh, it should be more unique and appropriate to the content, and i think i already have a poem entitled that, so i named it "it's something like pain" and then i look on and some other poet has a poem put up that's entitled "pain" . . . . okay that sounded so much funnier in my mind . . . . . .

-Kate

It’s something like Pain

He promised me forever
And forever sounded sweet
Until the day I found out
That his words were really cheap

His memory near dead
But you bring it alive
With something so simple
It was destined to thrive

It’s enough to make me cry
In the dark of night
But everything seems different
In the warmth of daylight

But I’m here now
And waiting so well
My mind is fraught with torment
My own personal hell

It’s a pain I don’t want you to see
Locked in confines of steel
Clad in shackles of ancient times
A feeling I rarely feel

It’s like a man without a soul
Something unnatural to see
Coming out of sick perversion
And it’s somewhere inside of me

But I’m tired of feeling weighed
It’s time for you to see
That the only things I’m letting out
Are the things I want to be

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
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1 posted 2007-10-21 09:17 PM

wow Kate darling I think this is one of my favorites by you the flow was amazing...
Krysti

Alaina
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since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

2 posted 2007-10-21 09:55 PM

i LOVED this...i've noticed that with many people they try too hard to make it rhyme and it comes out sounding too simple but with your writing it was still very poetic...great job i really enjoyed it

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

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