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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2007-10-21 12:41 PM


I still call you my best friend
Even though you never call
I told you that i felt the change
Why are you blaming me with this fall?
How can you say youv'e been there
When you left in my time of need?
How could i have helped but push you away?
I didn't want you to be burdened by me
I'm sorry that you feel this way
but one thing will never change
The words that hang Around your neck
Imprinted on you chain

If I'm already dead to you
Then maybe i really should die
I'll dig my grave in the ground
the place where I'll forever lie

this poem was written to a friend who i was in the middle of a fight with. it was over the internet and we got into a battle of poems war thing so this was a response to her poem titled : a note to my dead friend and it went like this:

you know i used to call you my friend
no wait my best friend
what happend you changed
you rearranged yourself
now i dont even know you
yet i was still there for you
but you just pushed me away
and now all i can say is
that im sorry
sorry for being you friend
sorry that i said we would be tight till the end
im sorry cuz i knew friends dont last forever
people just say it cuz it ryhymes or whatever
but were still just kids
well learn from out mistakes and childhood years

anyways luckily were friends again but its kinda shakey. so yeah enjoy.

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