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Teen Poetry #8

Free Fall

Relo
Junior Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 10

0 posted 2008-01-03 02:37 PM

Jumped off the cliff, I’ve felt the rush
It wasn’t enough, Thirsty for risk
Played with matches just to hope for burn
Played with cars just to make them crash
Not enough adrenaline in my past
Clock ticks as my time bomb blows
No one watches my agitated state
Only chaos to break the silent peace of mind.
When I’m correct and they’re out of order.
Signs show I’m not crazy
Just the first with this type of disorder.
Love, they don’t understand mine
I just walk along a very thin line
In a very high place, but a very small world
Question this galaxy and let minds unfurl
As I wonder when I fell free
No more and nothing to restrain me
Maybe my mind fell a long time ago
Trapped, my mind felt it had to go
Only thing I know as I type this
My freefall down the page might ignite this
Passion for something I can’t control
Aimlessly wanders without a goal.

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2008-05-23 12:12 PM

really like this.

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

2 posted 2008-05-23 02:04 PM

Spectacular write!

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

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