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Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-10-20 05:59 PM


Close your eyes, and pretend to be alseep
Theres no such thing
As a secret keeping itself
So spill your guts
And tell me everything
Ill keep your secrets
As we drown in spirits

The bottles all gone
And your lying on the floor
Theres no saying anything
Because your begging for more
But how much is too much baby
Have you confessed
That everythings about you
Because your so blessed

your an illness baby
your just so contagious
your hands down gorgeous
and im dying of you

© Copyright 2007 Bryan Lucas - All Rights Reserved
RevengeIsMine
Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia
1 posted 2007-10-20 08:21 PM


This is great.. thanx for making me smile...

Luv n Kisses,
Jess

Alaina
Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106

2 posted 2007-10-20 11:45 PM


wow this was really amazing i loved it

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

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