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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-10-20 12:05 PM

Broken Tears, Broken Smiles, Broken Words, Corrupted Files

I guess your happy now
That my tears have smudged this ink
My eye is still throbbing
Its turned black from shades of pink
The tears are still falling
And I don’t know how to make them stop
I need the kiss of death
And to the ground I wish to drop

I wish this was all a dream
And that soon I shall awake
I guess I really couldn’t have it all
And this is the icing on the cake

You say he didn’t need to start it
That my brother caused this all
The truth is that your lying
It was you that made this hell

Don’t bother saying that you love me
Because I’ve heard it all before
You still keep on saying it
But hell it only happens more

Now you lying on the ground
Passed out from all this mess
N heres everyone telling me its my fault
You just shouldn’t have done that Jess

I guess the truth is that I hate myself
For every little thing I’ve done
But I can’t live this life anymore
Because it’s bringing me undone

Bitter tears will haunt my past
And they will be forever falling
And I know this black eye will stay awhile
But I’m certain it wont last

Today you lost your daughter
You buried her alive
You drowned me in a pool of insults
And I couldn’t be revived
You can sling your insults
And I’ll try my best not to cry
You can throw your punches
And I’ll try my best to die…

Not my best work but emotional

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-10-20 10:34 AM

wow i liked it. pian is definalty the thrid (this is my personal opinion) strongest emotion, then comes hate in second, and love in first. love overpowers hate, and hate can over shadow grief. i thought this was very relatable. i loved it, library.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-20 12:36 PM

wow Jess you really nailed this I liked it... and I hope everything works out for the best. That things will get better for you.
Best Wishes,
Krysti

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2007-10-20 05:51 PM

this was amazing and hurting at the same time. a beutiful tragidy written in emotion.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2007-10-20 08:22 PM

Thankyou Guys....

Hugs 2 u all

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

5 posted 2007-10-26 03:45 PM

it was a gorgeous poem just the way you put the words and the emotions together you got the ride of a life time and i would never change anything becuase it would take back that ride i just experienced i would have to say it is close to one of your best

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

6 posted 2007-10-26 04:18 PM

that was amazing

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

7 posted 2007-10-26 04:18 PM

plz read my poem in Dark Poetry #4, It's called Flames

Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

8 posted 2007-10-26 09:59 PM

i changed it to no more breathing in.

prettypinkrebel
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 104

9 posted 2007-11-09 07:33 AM

Hey! I love it! hope things get better for you and i totally understand im in your positon now.. thanks fir speaking my mind as well
**hugs**
Adreanna Leigh

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2007-11-12 10:13 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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