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LOSTinTHISworld
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0 posted 2007-10-17 05:57 PM


do you ever think about me
i never thought we'd be this far apart
and now the closest i can get
is where i keep you in my heart

but i remember a time when
we stood so close together
and i remember a time when we held hands
and i wished it would last forever

and im gonna miss the days when you suprised me
you were sitting on my couch when i got home
you were smiling
im gonna miss those days

i think about you all the time
i never thought id have to miss you this much
and no all i have is memories of love

and im gonna miss the days when we'd take the bus
you would lay on my shoudler
oh how i loved it so much
im gonna miss those days

ive never felt so lonely
i never thought my heart would feel so empty
and now all i have to hold is
pictures of you and me

but i remeber a time when we would
play our guitars together
and i remeber a time when we would kiss
and i wished it would last forever

and im gonna miss they days when we went swimming
in our little boat in the pool
we were kissing
im gonna miss those days
im gonna miss those day
im gonna miss everything about you

{in a million years i wont be over you}

© Copyright 2007 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-18 08:00 PM


awe this was so sad I can relate so much to it too.
Loved it
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-10-18 08:01 PM


wow so sad and well written i enjoyed reading it very well done
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