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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 2007-10-16 09:39 PM





It’s a world of conflict
But I have a haven in havoc
Too much is wasted in dreaming
And nothing set in stone

Edges can dull in a moment
And minds can change in a thought
Right can seem all but impossible
And love, hopeless

But then, we remember in our past
Through the years and lakes of tears
That some things exist
Well, outside of fairytales

Near tangible, and sweet in memory
Like a rose in the winter
When life should be death
A slit of a view of beyond

It’s a world of conflict
A rule of thumb un-ignored
Too much for a person alone
I suppose that’s why there are two

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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1 posted 2007-10-16 11:05 PM


I liked this, such true words my favorite part was

That some things exist
Well, outside of fairytales ~

Keep writing Kate Darling
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-10-18 07:56 PM


it was wonderful just amazing words that only you could write
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