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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-10-15 09:53 PM



Head spinning around the decision I must make,
I wonder how much more my broken heart can take,
The longer I wait the harder it gets to decide,
why can't I figure out what I'm feeling inside,

Logan was my first for everything i've ever done,
and when I felt cold he always brought out the sun,
He used to call and say he loved me every night,
and he always felt my hurt when I was not alright,

now he only calls me to make sure i'm still alive,
we had so much ahead but instead we took a nose dive,
it takes me everything I have to not break down and cry,
how did we go from so in love to barely getting by,

Then Justin came to pick up my broken heart,
I always feel him with me even when we're apart,
He's crazy about me and I can always make him smile,
he said he'd wait for me for longer than a while,

So now I have to choose door one or door two,
while they're still both saying, "baby I love you"
I don't know which one I love more,
I wish I could take a peek behind each door,

And still the longer I wait the harder it's getting,
I din't know love could become so upsetting.

© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
surf_painter
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1 posted 2007-10-16 07:29 PM


wow this was great i loved it and felt the indecision myself great job
buttercupbaby
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2 posted 2007-10-16 08:08 PM


heyy.
i really liked this.

jus a bit of advice, or somethin, its always hard to forget your first love, cause like you said, they are your first for everything.
it doesnt mean they'll be your last though.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-10-16 09:38 PM


hunnie darling, pray. duh! lol, the answer to everything. love ya, hope you figure it out.

-Kate Darling (no darling is not my last name, i just thought it sounded pretty.)

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Abbeon
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4 posted 2007-10-17 02:40 PM


If the sun in life leaves you don’t hide in the darkness, Hun, join me and dance in the moonlight...
Translation: If Logan is no longer making you dazzle and you feel less like loves and more like faint friends. Don’t hide or try to force your self into a decision, let go of the link and let things flow around you.
Immerse your self in the stream and follow it, dance in the moonlight and enjoy life until your problem wears down to size and you can see every thing around you.

Translation to a translation let go of Logan, enjoy life then decide if you want a new lover.

Hunnie remember I am your friend even more when you need me

Beckie Mackie.
Hugs from Abbeon= )

The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.

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