»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
a sad song
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
a sad song |
|
|
LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
its been a while since my own lyrics touched me... words from the past when i was so unhappy words of sadness, words of misery words from the worst days of my life... i hear them now and they hurt me they all came back. but i remember a time, when those words were erased from my mind, a time when the only thoughts i had were about you... and those thoughts... they made me happy, i was happy, i was in love... you were all i needed i smiled, and wrote about love about a future where i loved i loved you.... thats how i pictured my happy ending... and i remember that day where you said goodbye, and those old feelings of pain and misery, and sadness all came rushing back and now they are here to stay here to hurt me what do i do? i love you dearly {in a million years i wont be over you} [This message has been edited by LOSTinTHISworld (10-14-2007 11:04 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2007 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
Very sad Lost, thanks for sharing your pain with us. moon. |
||
|
surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
so sad and lonely wow that was an emotional poem and i liked it |
||
hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow so much emotion and the flow was good too Krysti |
||
|
LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
its nice to know how you feel about my poetry...although i hope you never feel the same way i did when i wrote this...i am hurt, sad....im trying to get used to it... maybe one day we'll both be happy {in a million years i wont be over you} |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
