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forever*wishing
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where my heart is

0 posted 2007-10-12 11:56 PM


leaves move around and fly above my head
cool winds blow abstract, and turn my nose red
oh yes, this season has finally arrived
you can feel it in the air, and see it in the skiies

colors around me are falling from the trees
around in circles, my hair runs with the breeze
echoing laughter is open faded fields
where anything and everything seems too good to be real

the sun is barely in the sky painting colors as it goes
shining eyes scream what only autumn's freedom knows
above us fades to black, sharing it's tiny shimmering dreams
such a beautiful background matching your eyes that brightly gleam

i would give up everything to live in this day
holding your hand, if only it would stay
this elaborate scene has rhythm, it has rhyme
baby, your hearts beating stops all sense of time.

~bec

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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forever*wishing
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where my heart is
1 posted 2007-10-13 12:09 PM


just seeing if commenting on my post will make the picture change...


there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

Alaina
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2 posted 2007-10-13 01:10 PM


wow this was really great...it really described my love of fall...good work

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

forever*wishing
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where my heart is
3 posted 2007-10-13 03:41 PM


FALL iiS DEFiiNATELY MY FAVORiiTE SEASON <3 IT JUST MAKES ME FEEL SO HAPPY =] AND ii WAS TRYiiNG TO WRiiTE HOW iiT MAKES ME FEEL, BUT ii STiiLL CANT CAPTURE THE EMOTiiON...
AND THANX =]


there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

buttercupbaby
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outside in the rain
4 posted 2007-10-15 02:21 AM


yes you did it!
haha i remember talking about you wanting to write this.. C:

its really great.
you definitely did it extremely well!

-ris

forever*wishing
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where my heart is
5 posted 2007-10-15 06:15 PM


oh ya, on the roof at like 2 or 3 in the morning, freezing coldnesssssss! haha, jk--it wasn't that cold, but ya i member =]...

thanx =]...and its talking about my boyfriend.. *] wink wink...lol...the one i talk about all the time...haha...im so stupid =)P


there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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