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Teen Poetry #8

Bound to You

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

0 posted 2007-10-11 07:10 PM

It’s like I’m stuck behind glass,
All I want is to touch your skin.
Instead I’m getting caught in your ocean blue eyes
Unable to swim my way back out.
If only I had the chance to touch my lips to yours,
Let you feel how I feel when your skin grazes mine.
Maybe then, you’d know what it’s like to be bound in your love.
No one can free me except the one which I desire.
Please, untie me, let my soul breathe again.
You’re in possession of my heart,
But it’s someone else’s that you want.
Your name is carved into each of my thoughts,
You will, forever, be on my mind.

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

1 posted 2007-10-12 11:59 PM

wow. i really liked this! =]
its so relatable, and really well written.. good going, keep it up! =]
~bec

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-15 09:32 PM

Yes, very relatable I really liked this so sweet...
Krysti

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