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Teen Poetry #8

The Was, The Now

thinktwice
Member

since 2003-12-23

Posts 125
United States

0 posted 2007-10-09 05:43 PM

Spent hours silently counting
the days, not appreciating time
in the now, before the was had come
to blow my mind away

And if the change created life
settled, and still we don't see,
High art casting such words to
Begger's plees,

Could the memories fall slowly
before all the will has gone
from amusement or would the
wrestless rise at welcome invitation?

We spent hours silently counting
in subconscious dreams, not appreciating
times in the was, after the now came
to blow my head away

So if the change continued life,
now settled, and still we don't see
High art casting such words to
the dreamers needs,

Would the memories fall slowly
after all the will isn't found
from amusement nor the wrestless
rising at welcome invitation?

I think not.

Yodels
New Member

since 2007-10-06

Posts 3
Australia

1 posted 2007-10-10 05:45 AM

um...i liked it but im not really sure if i understand it..

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-10-10 02:12 PM

One of my favorites from you, the flow was good and the content blew me away you really have talent.
Krysti

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