Rise Above This ( You Were Not Honest)

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Teen Poetry #8

Rise Above This ( You Were Not Honest)

thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23

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0 posted 2007-10-09 05:08 PM

We rise above this
You could not own this
Words which lay so bare
Words which lay so cold
Spoken with mal-intent

We rise above this
We could not own this
We'll rise above it
We'll rise above it

The lonely will die alone,
standing unaware to
the muse's stare.
Now the party turns
Now the party turns

We were not honest,
We'll die alone
We were not honest
We'll die alone

Now this soul is dry
Now this soul is dry

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29

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where my heart is

1 posted 2007-10-13 12:01 PM

was this a song or something you wrote? b/c if so, that would be pretty much an awesome song =]
the feeling it gave was so strong and meaningful..really good! =]
~bec

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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2 posted 2007-10-13 08:28 PM

oh my goodness, this is the soul peice of work that i love at this moment. it was so incredible in reality i'm completly speechless . . . . . . you really should see my face i'm sure my mouth was open, and is right now (suths chin with hand) so wow, this is one of my library peices, and i loved the words mal-intent and we were not honest. wow, it was so simple and so . . . . good. wow.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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3 posted 2007-10-13 08:29 PM

sorry, in my mind boggle, i totally forgot to add this to my library, so i had to comment again, lol. air head i am . . .

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

thinktwice
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since 2003-12-23

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4 posted 2007-10-15 12:54 PM

thanks for the feedback.

yeah they are lyrics i just penned for a tune i wrote.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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5 posted 2007-10-15 09:37 PM

Wow there is always something about your poetry that amazes me... the words seem so strong loved this Adam
Krysti

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