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LOSTinTHISworld
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 94
canada

0 posted 2007-10-08 07:44 PM


lately im hiding
and im crying uncontrollably
lately im falling faster
will you catch me
i'll put strength in your hands
just give me a chance

what do i do,
is it me
or is it you

harsh words fill my mind
but i bite my tongue
thats all i hide
but they're not mine
no hurt comes with pride
but your not blind

so tie me up
tare off my mask
you'll find the same eyes staring back
cuz i dont hide my heart from you


lately im angry
and im raging uncontrollably
lately im falling faster
than gravity

what do i do
its not me
and its not you

i sit here dreaming
that im sitting here screaming
but i can only sit in silence
crying til im dried out
i know your far away
but im worried that you'll hear me
and im worried that you'll walk through the door and see me bleeding

so tie me up
tare off my mask
you'll find the same heart staring back
cuz i dont hide my eyes from you

lately im raging
and breaking more than my mind
seek and you shall find
but dont get too close  dont get inside
i just need time

how do i let go
when ive heard more words
than i need to know

but they're not mine
no hurt comes with pride
but you're not blind

so tie me up
tare off my mask
you'll find the same loving staring back
cuz i dont hide.


{in a million years i wont be over you}

© Copyright 2007 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved
nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
1 posted 2007-10-09 02:06 PM


that was rly good

NIKKI  

forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is
2 posted 2007-10-12 09:08 PM


it was a little hard to read, but it was probably just me, lol =]
but it showed such passion, and i liked it =]

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
3 posted 2007-10-15 09:30 PM


Wow I loved this. Another one I like by you...
Krysti

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
4 posted 2007-10-16 07:35 PM


wow it read well and it was just a gorgeous poem so well written with such emotion i loved it
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