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Alex pb
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since 2007-07-25
Posts 22
Arizona

0 posted 2007-10-06 04:34 PM



when two hearts combine

average lives clash
combined by astonishment of their beauty
souly a single purpose
love.

A darks past finished
gone. with its pain and sorrow
here. a new found love,
filling the void of loneliness

this perfect masterpiece of a woman
falling. to this trueman of compassion
imperfections absent, non-existent to him
All perfection seen on this love..

waking to a beauty so pure
causes his heart to flourish
his touch nourishes her desires
for this is true love...



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nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
1 posted 2007-10-08 04:40 PM


dat was rly good in dis poem i rly dont see anythin u would need ta work on!!!!!

NIKKI  

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