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rebelangelv
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0 posted 2007-10-06 03:13 PM


I love you so much
I really do
But do you love me back?
I don’t have a clue

You’ve told me who you love
And it’s not me
She doesn’t like you but I do
Can’t you see?

It’s this twisted triangle
That I can’t get out of
I’ve tried so hard to stop
Because I know it’s wrong

But I can’t help it
It’s true I love you

We’re so close
Yet we are so far apart
I wanna tell you
But I won’t let you break my heart

I can’t go through that pain
That I’ve dealt with before
Ill go insane
And ill hit the floor

Can’t believe its you I fell for

But I can’t let you know
I can’t let you go
And now I cry when I see you
With her doing things I wish I could do
I don’t know what to do
Cause everything’s a blur
Still can’t believe I love you

So I live concealing my feelings
For the rest of my life
Ill always hide
How I really feel inside

Ill just have to deal
Knowing that you’ll never love me
Even though I’d die for you
Can’t you see?

Love can lift you up high
Or it can leave you to die
And I’m dying cause
I keep trying

To take the risk
But you won’t understand
You’ll never be my man
Yet ill still love you till the end


© Copyright 2007 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-06 04:37 PM


Can’t believe its you I fell for~

Ahh but everything happens for a reasong even though it's not always the best for us theres always a reason. I love this poem I've felt like this in the best of times
Krysti

Fathima
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since 2007-10-07
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taif,saudi arabia
2 posted 2007-10-24 07:56 AM


what a coincidece but you have written something that exactly tells what kind of position i'm in. i love it. it's so nice.


rebelangelv
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3 posted 2007-10-25 12:09 PM


thank u!! well im glad that i had something that u could relate to.
voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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4 posted 2007-10-26 06:18 PM


Your poem has some pretty strong feelings in it, well pretty strong words, but beautiful
rebelangelv
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5 posted 2007-10-26 09:24 PM


strong feelings and strong words.... u think thats good? well thanx if u did
llushsoweet
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since 2007-11-07
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6 posted 2007-11-07 11:05 PM


leah you AMAZE me =))))
<33333333

rebelangelv
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7 posted 2007-11-07 11:06 PM


awwwwwwww thank u !!!! i love u too!!! triple L
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-11-12 10:10 PM


Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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