My General Thoughts About You

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Teen Poetry #8

My General Thoughts About You

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-10-06 03:41 AM

My General Thoughts About You

When I'm left alone I think of you and I
How when we're together the time flies by
and feeling the sun on my face,
brings me back to your embrace

I think of how you look at me
your face is all that I can see
I love the colour of your eyes
it's like waking up to see the sun rise

I never thought anyone could love me like you do,
or that I'd love anyone ad much as I love you
but times have changed my opinion and mind
I never expected I'd be so blind

I think back to your head on my chest
it's times like those I think are best
The way I feel your smile when we're locked in a kiss
and when you're gone that only one thing I miss

I think it's time to do what I said I'd do
tell you my general thought about you

nicole leigh
Junior Member

since 2007-09-19

Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson

1 posted 2007-10-09 02:14 PM

awww dat was cute dats how i feel

NIKKI

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2007-10-09 06:35 PM

Yes to tell the person how you feel and what’s going on is good. It’s all so good to have your eyes wide open when you enter a relationship. Amazing poem Hunnie As always you rock.

Abbeon.

The world behind these thoughtful eyes, caution may seem crazy.

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