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Aflame
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0 posted 2007-10-06 02:54 AM




River


You should go on like a river if
You are thought as a river.
Hide the gold sand that glistens
In your deep, clear water.

Carve your life and passion deep
Before pouring into the ocean.
Powerful you¡¦ll find yourself when
The height helps you strengthen.

From a spring to a creek
And from a creek to a river.
You rush forward, humming.
Cary the gold as suffer.

Fear not if one day you
Dry out before the ocean.
What you¡¦ll leave behind is the
Soul that¡¦s kind of golden.


© Copyright 2007 Sophia Sun - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-10-06 03:37 AM


I liked this... Kinda makes me think of going on like you said... A River. Welcoem to Passions I hope you like it here and you find what you're looking for. Great First Post
Krysti

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2 posted 2007-10-06 07:39 AM


Hello Aflame, Hey I like that name.
I love your poem
it was so great
it made me think
of words of fate

-Kate

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Aflame
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3 posted 2007-10-07 12:14 PM


Thank you!  I like this poem, too.  I'm the type of person who always tries to find a way to encourage him/herself... Haha!
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4 posted 2007-10-07 09:23 AM


Sophia~

WELCOME to this wonderful circle of poets and friends~

I like the way your water-words run~

Lovely first post~
Enjoy your stay ... lots of talented folks here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2007-10-08 04:52 PM


great poem i hope you like passions

NIKKI  

Aflame
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6 posted 2007-10-09 11:34 PM


Haha, I will.
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