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LOSTinTHISworld
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0 posted 2007-10-04 04:00 PM


woke up that morning, with you by my side
and in that moment, everything felt so right
in eachother arms, speaking with our eyes
it was when you smiled, that i wanted to freeze time

and have that moment last forever
the rest of the world was still
as we lay together
i felt so alive, with you by my side

and as we lay together, the thought crossed my mind
i found my heart dreading,hearing the words goodbye
and when the time came, i walked you to your car
it was a painful wait, as i waited for your call

the taste of your kiss lingers on my lips
the warmth of your body pressed against mine
is what i miss
i can't stop thinking about you, i hope i see you soon

it seems like lately, you're all thats on my mind
you're all that i see, everytime i close my eyes
and it reminds me, of that moment
and in my heart i feel, i feel so close to it

i see your face, i see your eyes
i see the way they looked into mine
but its when i see your smile
it brings me back to life

{in a million years i wont be over you}

© Copyright 2007 becky dudley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-10-06 02:23 AM


wow it's like you are living my life. you write beautiful work Becky. I loved this everything about it. It takes me home...
Krysti

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