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Teen Poetry #8
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surf_painter
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0 posted 2007-10-03 11:34 PM


My passion once there
Now gone it goes
Seeping to the ground
My soul fading
Too much like a ghost

Am I dieing here
Do they take my last breath
Stop my heart from beating
Will this be
My final resting place

Where will I go
Once I stop the fighting
Once I win myself
The hands will stop
My mind will race

I'll be free atlast
To dance
With the wind
And the rain
Elements in my hair


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1 posted 2007-10-04 08:03 PM


Wow I really liked the thought in this poem. it felt like I knew every feeling and everyhting. Thank you for sharing your amazing words.
Krysti

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