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sweet lily |
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LOSTinTHISworld Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 94canada |
like the first time i saw that flower in your hair like the first time i saw you smile i knew i'd care sweet lily wont you hold my hand just one more time and maybe later we can lay in bed and think about all the the times we laugh and, we sang and we danced the night away sweet lily wont think of me when we're far apart will you remember all i've said that came from my heart like i love you, and i miss you i think about you every day and maybe one day we'll be young together back to a time when nothing matters make memories that will last forever just you and me we could be free swill lily wont you play that song for me one more time the words they may make me cry but they'll make me think of the time you first played it, so shy i'd never felt to high sweet lily wont you swing with me and fly though the sky and maybe later we can lay in the pool and look into the night at the stars that will always remind me of you and maybe one day we'll be young together back to a time when nothing matters make memories that will last forever just you and me we could be free like the last time i saw that flower in your hair like the last time i saw you smile i knew i'd always care {in a million years i wont be over you} [This message has been edited by LOSTinTHISworld (10-03-2007 09:39 PM).] |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe this was so sweet I liked this. Krysti |
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MegMeg Member
since 2007-05-14
Posts 85Virginia |
Amazing....simply amazing |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
awww it makes me think of an old couple where the one has passes away it was so lovely and sweet i hope to see you writing a lot |
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