I'm breaking inside(Without you)

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Teen Poetry #8

I'm breaking inside(Without you)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-09-29 06:51 PM

Friday nights hurt me the most,
it's one on one with my personal ghost,
I think my mom thinks I'm going insane,
she just doesn't know it's only pain,

we used to spend every Friday together,
but it's all changed just like the weather,
as soon as summer turned into fall,
it's like we didn't know eachother at all,

Everyone seems to worry so much about me,
I can't believe they can see through my happy,
I guess they see I'm breaking inside,
nomatter how hard I try I just can't hide,

whenever I'm without you I feel so lost,
i'd do anything to see you nomatter what it cost,
without you i'm stuck in a bottomless hole,
are you at home laughing was this your goal,

Reading all your old emails today,
reminded me of the things I need to say,
I just wish I knew if our love really died,
Because without you I'm breaking inside

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-09-29 08:02 PM

oh krysti, hunnie i hope you feel better. Life is hard, i know how you feel and it sucks. be strong my dear.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Mr. Omniscient
Member

since 2006-10-28

Posts 134

2 posted 2007-09-29 09:48 PM

Great depth with a great flow. Admirable.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2007-09-29 11:53 PM

hunnie,
This is a well written emoting piece. How I do recall times like this. You know there are a few of us who are just engineered for love early and intensely. So because I know the feeling I truly hope your heart heals soon.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

4 posted 2007-10-01 11:21 AM

Very good! Im sorry this has happend, hope all goes well. I can relate to it pretty well though. Keep on writing, you have a true talent.

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2007-10-06 03:25 PM

this is reallllllly good. i love it. i havent been on in a while and i forgot how to add to my library. can n e one tell me how?

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