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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-09-26 04:36 PM



THis poem is dedicated to my friend John S.P. You're the best. (Even though he can't see this, he is.)

Listen

Perhaps in simple words
You can’t hear me
Of all of the things I’ve done
It was the one I refused to leave

It maybe because I loved you
That it tore me apart
But in simple words
I can’t express my heart


"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
1 posted 2007-10-09 01:57 PM


dat was pretty good u should use better wordes

NIKKI  

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