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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-09-23 08:04 AM


Confused and Angry

It was like a suffocating need
I couldn’t stand you mad at me
As I heard the word of your anger
I was deeply surprised and shocked

Your Edwardian grace and kindness
Had never felt that way before
You’ve never been angry with me
Something I loved and cherished

Four days I sat and seethed
Not knowing of your sudden reason
You left me alone, something I took hard
The closest person to me ignoring

I finally couldn’t take it
I gave you my pleading apology
You were as surprised as I had been
You had never been angry

I’m shocked and relieved beyond measure
A weight I hated lifted
And I was glad to have you back
A friend I couldn’t live without

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2007-09-23 02:03 PM


I really loved this. It almost felt like a conversation to me. It's definately one of my faves by you. Going in  my library.

Chloe

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (09-24-2007 04:49 PM).]

nicole leigh
Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
2 posted 2007-09-24 05:31 PM


i loved this poem great job i know the feeling except i never got that friend back so you should be greatful

nicole leigh pitt

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2007-09-24 08:08 PM


yeah, he loves me. lol. more like a brother would love a sister, for all that he teases me, but he loves me.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
4 posted 2007-09-24 10:05 PM


"And I was glad to have you back
A friend I couldn’t live without"

Ah, if only all could be solved just as simply. I've been gone for a while, but i'm back now and i chose to read yours first. I'm very glad that i did

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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