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crazybeautiful_x01
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since 2007-09-17
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0 posted 2007-09-21 02:32 PM


Nothing is what it use to be; there are only fake smiles and hugs

Nobody seems to show feelings for another unless they are using them

Halloween is still dark; but nobody follows the routine anymore now all there is to do is party with your friends

What I drink doesn't taste the same and what I eat is only made from machines

What is this world coming to

My friends don't come around as much anymore and at home I'm alone more

School is so plane you walk by so many different people they are all alike now

No need to make anymore plans for the future the internet will tell you where and how

I miss back in 96' when there was only t.v. programs up till 12 o' clock midnight & cell phones weren't invented

Who knows what the future will hold by the time my family slowly decay in their caskets

I don't want to be alive when we hit 210 and 220; technology only moves forward, not back

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
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1 posted 2007-09-21 05:16 PM


ah but dear beautiful there is hope. civilizations have been known to digress. digresstion is possible. in some ways we have digressed as a people. but it was lovely dear. very nice. i totally agree and my personal opinion is that the food agentcies are controling the public through the food they give us- make us get cancer and such and then destroing the cure once we found it. and yes the cure was found. and destroyed as well.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
2 posted 2007-09-24 05:35 PM


this poem was pretty good and you are right i guess i cant realy relate because i am 13 but still i bet your right

nicole leigh pitt

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