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tell me why (reply tell me what yall think) |
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kamo New Member
since 2007-09-05
Posts 9 |
tell me why people cry tell me why people get hurt tell why people say i love you and dont mean it tell me why people die tell why live tell me why people have frieds but dont have friend tell me why peolpe go to school tell me why people fight for us and lose there life just tell me why i wrote this when i was 7 years old when my dad best friend died in the war [This message has been edited by kamo (09-20-2007 09:00 PM).] |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
This is all right for a seven year old, lol! It's pretty good, and reflects the confusion that kids often feel that are more often than not ignored. : ] Good write We do not write because we want to, |
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nicole leigh Junior Member
since 2007-09-19
Posts 44Eau Clair Wisconson |
wow that was pretty good for a 7 year old!!!! nicole leigh pitt |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Kamo, Wow! Some pretty heavy questions for a seven-year-old, I don’t remember what I was asking around then but definitely not questions like these. I do not know how old you are now but I think it would be neat if you rewrote this, keeping the questions, but also try to answer the questions. Maybe think of what your parents said when you asked them these (if you did) or what you’ve learned since the time this is written but of course that’s just my opinion. Thank you for sharing this piece from your life, it was interesting to try and answer the questions myself, makes a body think. I hope to read more from you soon. Stargal "The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away" @-->--- |
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