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thinktwice
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0 posted 2007-09-19 04:18 AM



Before you read this let me just say...there is alot of philosophical thought in here. And if it makes you thinktwice then I've done my duty. didn't proof read either. woops.

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I'm the same way I was before: taking places in the beds of strangers has me speaking words to a thousand trained ears and novice minds. As if history itself belonged to me. Sometimes I say I'll say:

"If it is way we wish wouldn't the power of forever be lost? I can't help to mention I'm speaking as such a world as this wounds itself worst in generations."

I know more through the day-to-day and feel the numbness which has overcome even the brightest of hopes. These silent types always understanding the rhythms of life and rarely speaking in much less than wisdom.

The more I seem to speak the farther I fair to fall between indifference and the bleak outlook the multitude sings. Maybe the train is back on the track. I've pulled another round about; the same as always; aware of myself in the magnifying glass. I'll go on to say in stern tone:

"The Was has become the Is and the Will has become the Has Been."

We see life through the looking glass, through the treacherous perils of men, and the parallels between
the screams of the lost and the dance of summer's
yawn changing to autumns leaves pleading, "Put down your weapons, I mean you no harm."

© Copyright 2007 Adam Wolf - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-09-24 10:47 PM


I liked this it made me think. I'm not a big fan of the structure but the content was amazing..
Krysti

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