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Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
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0 posted 2007-09-18 08:37 AM


~needs work~

"can you come out and play?"
we were barely ever apart
always joined by hands
a simple peice of art.

"Tell me, tell me, tell me!"
we would plead
as we shared secrets
and swore secrecy in creed.

"Are you alright?"
You were always there for me,
i always had your back
together we could be free.

"forever and always"
we promised that night.
now i lie here alone,
crying into the moonlight.

"Sorry i forgot to call"
we lost control of everything,
we became too far gone,
to tend to such a blessing.

"Haven't talked to you in ages"
our past seems so far away
oh, how i would give up anything
to go back to yesterday.

© Copyright 2007 Leanne Jenkins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-09-19 01:38 AM


to go back to yesterday.~

Ahhh how many times I have wished for the same thing this was beautifully written, I loved it all the flow was a little off in some parts but for the most part it was good...
Krysti

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since 2006-05-29
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where my heart is
2 posted 2007-10-19 08:42 PM


wow...
if only i could go back to yesterday! definately a wish many have had,
this was really great, i liked it alot, i dont know why it only has one comment on it!

-bec-


there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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3 posted 2007-10-20 10:31 AM


hello dear leanne, you know i have a friend named leanne, so when ever i see your name or read your stuff i always see her face. but i liked this. it was lovely.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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