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Teen Poetry #8

Wait it Out

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-09-13 05:32 PM

And a realization came upon me
A sweet thing I’ve never known
I was treated like I’ve always wanted
All the time hiding, and completely condoned

Do my words make real my actions?
Does my face betray my inner thoughts?
The look on you face so distorted
And now my words tie themselves in knots

I’m sick to my stomach, thinking of this
I can’t be what you think I am- I’m just not
But maybe in the heat of life,
You’ll find someone who has your lot

But for now I’ll wait out my term
It’s the easiest thing to do
And even though it seem surreal
It’s the only line that’s true

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

[This message has been edited by RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed (09-14-2007 09:51 AM).]

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2007-09-14 06:02 PM

So I haven't been on here in a while but I will try and remember how to Critique

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I liked this a lot and I could understand what you we're saying mostly, it just seemed in some parts to jumble together almost.
Anyways I liked.

-Ash-

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