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thinktwice
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0 posted 2007-09-12 10:45 PM



She put in her words
Sonnets and bullet proof swords
She put in her rhymes
Reasons and camouflaged lies

She spoke to me in lies
Her reasons for a simple, "Why?"
She threw in her rhymes
Just to try and get by

But it was all a lie
Her love, her sugarcane eyes
She tried to get by
With smiles designed to disguise

I can still see her face
Glowing in her twisted way
It's over now, my head's down
Just left with a bad taste

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-09-13 05:35 PM


well, ummm judging by my mood and current state of mind and feeling, it was an entirely unsmart thing for me to read this. lol. i loved it but i can relate so much it hurts the blandest numbest coners of my heart.

library piece

-Red

yes i am aware of the fact that im confusing, sorry.

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

thinktwice
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2 posted 2007-09-13 07:41 PM


ya...90% of my stuff is darker or somewhat depressing.


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