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ResLife286 New Member
since 2007-09-02
Posts 7Canada |
Try to, picture me right behind you Holding Yo Hands Swinging us side to side as though We were doing a Slow Dance When I look into ure eyes I Got that feeling of being in a Beautifo-Trance Kisses to the back of ure neck Showing you some Romance Aint no joys that competes To being Yo Man Show you love baby Everytime that we Hold Hands Wrote this for my girl who left before I could give her this poem, just wanted to show someone |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
the slang spelling was sorta distracting, but it was kinda the style of the poem i guess,  i really liked it there's more to living than being alive |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
This was lovely |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe this was so sweet I loved it. Welcome to Passions hope to read more soon. I hope you find the chance to give it to her somehow... Krysti |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked it although in the begining the slang sort of mixed me up. But nice style and good stuff  .-Ash- |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
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