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Alex pb
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since 2007-07-25
Posts 22
Arizona

0 posted 2007-08-29 06:28 PM



Physical oppressions spread this deep love apart
a distance of many miles
Slowly, each lover take their hearts away
Far, this area of connecting vains..

Still connected by passion
Driven by compassion
Slowly straying away from their love...
Thinking of the heart felt love they still have

Many years of this determined love,
Felt only by this unspoken week of  sorrow
Missing, the part of her heart in which she lives...
Lacking, the part of his heart which makes him alive...

These seven days of misplaced love...
will only last hours...

dedicated: To my good friend Hailey

[This message has been edited by Alex pb (08-30-2007 12:43 AM).]

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buttercupbaby
Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
1 posted 2007-08-29 09:16 PM


woah.


thats all i can say.
it was beautiful.

~missy
afraid of my feelings and falling too deep, but i had to let go of the pain let it rain down on me

haiXraab
Junior Member
since 2007-07-29
Posts 10

2 posted 2007-08-30 06:26 PM


this was for me and my baby thats out of state for a week.....

alexis, you always seem to capture me in every poem you write, about me.

yer my bfffffffffffe

~hailey~

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