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[StepheN~]
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since 2007-04-19
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0 posted 2007-08-25 12:56 PM



The human race has become a disgrace,
For the massive loss of lives,
The real sense of a bloody death taste,

When did we go wrong?
Why can we not all just get along?

Is it really that hard?
The human race needs to be re carved,

We need new shape,
We all need to learn to love in such a beautiful place,

Its your world,
its my world,
Its their world too,

Why all the war and death compute?
EXACTLY NO REASON!
the entire world needs to make a move,

Untill the day were all dead upon the ground we lay,
The world will be a Hellenistic place,
Who's hand,
Who's face - will you next embrace?

Will you please just take a leap of faith,
And decide to make that person another Race,

Forget color and money- oil and soil,
The world is everyones,
Be happy and loyal,

The time has come,
A new age of peace has just begun,
Wont YOU help me?
This old age war and pain needs to be Done~

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
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1 posted 2007-08-25 04:41 PM


I like this one. If only the rest of the world could think like this... Yea right! Nice job.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-08-25 08:23 PM


When did we go wrong?
Why can we not all just get along?~

ahhh yes, why? the big question I really loved this.
Krysti

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