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[StepheN~]
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since 2007-04-19
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0 posted 2007-08-25 11:25 AM



Feeling so distant,
My world walks away,
Im in a new place,
Yes a new world of fate,

Taking new steps and breathing new words,
I dont know whats ahead of me,
But its new love i prefer,

I need a breath of fresh air,
I need a new girl to whom my eyes only stare,
For my hands to grasp-and run my fingers through her hair,

Call me hopeless romantic,
Call me whatever you want,

I'll find her one day,
For my will to Love is set very taunt.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-08-25 12:01 PM


I liked the ides in this poem very sweet   Welcome to Passions

Krysti

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
2 posted 2007-08-25 04:31 PM


Very sweet I agree with hunnie!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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