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Teen Poetry #8

Translucent Love

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

0 posted 2007-08-25 04:48 AM

You're holding my hand,
but i can't feel you there.
You say you're sorry,
but i don't think you care.

You're kissing my lips,
but i can't taste you anymore.
You say it's just a bad day,
but i've heard that one before.

You're looking into my eyes,
but you're not seeing me.
You say you're just tired,
but i can sense your misery.

You're telling me you love me,
But it's not you're voice i hear.
You say you'll be better soon,
But i'm sure it's insincere.

You're walking my way,
but i know im not your objective.
You say it's you, not me,
but i don't think i can forgive.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2007-08-25 10:03 AM

Leanne~
Welcome to the wonderful circle of PiP~

I see you're finding your way around the different forums ... by continuing to read and reply to the works of others ... we will come to know you~

Thanks for the reply you left on my 'Sweet Sisterly Love' piece~

Glad you are here~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-25 12:03 PM

oh wow this was so amazing the flow, words everything. Weclome to Passions

(Please check your e-mail for a special greeting)

Krysti

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-08-25 04:33 PM

"You're holding my hand,
but i can't feel you there.
You say you're sorry,
but i don't think you care."

This is beautiful, and yes, welcome to pip

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

4 posted 2007-09-07 11:57 AM

I really like this one. Keep it up I love reading your poems even though I do not reply on all.

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