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[StepheN~]
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since 2007-04-19
Posts 15


0 posted 2007-08-25 12:37 PM



Feeling sick inside,
I just left everything behind,

I hate saying goodbye,
but i feel the time is right,

I tried giving you everything i had
You never really cared and just turned your back,

I used to cry,
I promised you i would never lie,

I promised you my heart,
And what you did with my love was not very smart,

You just through it away,
O how i call You! so brave,

So now that im never looking back at this day,
i hope you remember how real love tastes,
And when i walk away from you-i'll leave no trace,

To many times in to many lives,
Love is misplaced and often dies,

I'll never make this mistake again,
I'm moving on with my life,
Yes this is the END!

© Copyright 2007 [StepheN~] - All Rights Reserved
Leanne <3
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since 2007-08-25
Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia
1 posted 2007-08-25 04:37 AM


i really like thiss
i can definitely relate

nice work.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love &lt;3
2 posted 2007-08-25 08:23 AM


gosh! i hate when that happens! nice poem. i liked it.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
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3 posted 2007-08-25 12:00 PM


wow I liked this a lot..
Krysti

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
4 posted 2007-08-25 04:27 PM


"To many times in to many lives,
Love is misplaced and often dies,"

Wow, amazing

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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