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0 posted 2007-08-16 01:31 PM


silence
peace

things we all long for
maybe the world just needs more

silence
peace

we have to have a reprieve
maybe we just need some relief

silence
peace

what we crave
why won't the world just behave

silence
peace

it's cruel, it's mean
but sometimes the good things remain unseen

silence
peace

reprieve
relief

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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1 posted 2007-08-16 05:06 PM


I still LOVE this one!!!!! C U @ Orientation!!!!!!!
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2 posted 2007-08-17 01:21 PM


What is cruel and mean?
I think you could go a bit more into it , describing a bit m ore

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3 posted 2007-08-17 05:40 PM


I'm pretty sure she's aying that occasionally silence and peace arn't what we want...however, I could be wrong...
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4 posted 2007-10-07 03:19 PM


yeah pen' right thats what i meant

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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