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Unrequited Love |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
All this time I though Watching you would be ok Then I start to realize You were fading away. What can I do? What should I do? Is it even possible for me To spent my time with you? Every time I try to tell you I always feel afraid. You might break my heart in two And that is something I can’t evade. I’ve been waiting and hoping That you’ll come to me, But that is just a dream Its time to face reality. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow, welcome to Passions (people are jusrt pouring in that is pretty awesome.) I liked this poem it flowed really nicely  Krysti ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
umm felt that, been there. take the bull by the horns boy-o. oh, and wellcome to pip. love the title. -Kate "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
that's a really good poem. I can relate to something like that. I'm new too. hope you get to read some of my poems too. Midnightdreamer |
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emptead New Member
since 2008-01-31
Posts 6 |
***THOUGHT, first line, dude.  |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
nice poem! and welcome to PIP cant wait to see more of your work! |
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